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A local group is looking for 'area experts' on the river and I've fished it almost all my life. I have a good deal of knowledge about it and whipped up a cover letter so far to send them--as I assume most applicants will just send a message. 

 

FishingResume1.docx

Any and ALL feedback is appreciated! 

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54 minutes ago, The All-Pro said:

A local group is looking for 'area experts' on the river and I've fished it almost all my life. I have a good deal of knowledge about it and whipped up a cover letter so far to send them--as I assume most applicants will just send a message. 

FishingResume1.docx

 

Any and ALL feedback is appreciated! 

Your second paragraph should be split into two paragraphs as the last two sentences address a different subject.  You indicate you pride yourself in adapting to changing conditions that present problems for other anglers. Then you start the next sentence with " As we all know"; if we all know this, why would it cause problems for other anglers?

In the last paragraph the third sentence needs some work.  First, I think you meant to say "I have been a member of" not "I have been a member on", and when I read the sentence I am not sure what group you are referring to.

Overall, your letter is much, much better than most that are on this site.

Good luck. 

ClearCreek

 

 

 

 

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Thank you very much! I appreciate that big time. I was relatively tired when I typed it up so it was sort of a "rough draft". 

That's the blessing I get for being a communications major, writing is my strong suit! 

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i think it's a good intro myself, much luck to you!

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36 minutes ago, buzzed bait said:

i think it's a good intro myself, much luck to you!

Thank you very much man! Much appreciated. 

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Any other opinions?! 

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