Anticipation, I wait

Familiar tap, tap

Set hook....Violence ensues

Let's keep this going.  Any poets wanna contribute?

Dawn upon the lake,

still broken by the buzz bait.

Life's troubles vanish.

HEY CEPH THIS THREAD EXPLAINS YOUR QUESTION ABOUT WEEDS

The lake is my home

the bass crave their solitude

I call, and they come.

On a half-sunken log

a frog sits

death lurks below

Up on plane, running tough.

sand blaster hits the face

gnats

UP ON A PLANE

WE CANNOT SEE IN FRONT OF US

THE TRIM TAB SITS BELOW

See, I knew if I didn't respond to your first post you couldn't resist contributing  

IN THE GREAT SEARCH FOR BASS,

I WANT TO BE TOP OF THE CLASS.

BUT I'M STILL JUST A NEWBIE,

AND THE BASS WHIP MY AZZ.

Ah Ceph but you wanted too ;D

IN THE GREAT SEARCH FOR BASS,

I WANT TO BE TOP OF THE CLASS.

BUT I'M STILL JUST A NEWBIE,

AND THE BASS WHIP MY AZZ.

I think Long Mike is definetly a candidate for #1 Mook in the making.

You funny.

What's at the end of the line?

I pull, it pulls back

Damnit, its a rock again.

or....

Running wide open at night.

Bump, bump, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM

GPS won't show barge wakes.

On a half-sunken log

a frog sits

death lurks below

Hey, thats a good one!!

Out on a log,

Siting on the brink

Cant catch anything big,

Just one dink

All I got on my line,

Is weeds and a kink

My line just broke,

Hope my Lucky Craft dont sink

Fishing is bad,

but the wife is mad, I think

The sun is setting,

With purple and pink

Over there is a blue heron,

And yonder is a mink

Hey look, its a babe!

She gives me a wink

Oh crap

I just dropped my beer in the drink

Lol, so where did you guys find the Black Hash? ;D

Nice one Bucketmouth!

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At least you got the structure right     Also, I like the excellent use of alliteration.  Overall, I give it 8/10 bonzais.

Hey Ceph what's he gonna do with 8 little trees anyway

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Very cool.  I think we have a winner!!!!

Buzz, jerk, twitch, and crank;

Deep and shallow boat and bank;

brush, stumps, weeds, and creeks.

Mist on the water

The world is quiet and calm

Perfection soon gone